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[Ballad of the Reaper]

Very Well Done

I enjoyed the detail of the art (I belive it's pencil?) and the great use of the Ken Burns effect. It gives a great feeling of sympathy for the poor mother as she loses her newborn.I did notice that in a couple of scenes you decided to reuse certain drawings to complete the plot. I also noticed that the first drawing of the reaper differed from the rest of your drawings mainly in the face/hood.

Overall, I enjoyed this. It brought me back to High School Television Productions Class. I would enjoy seeing more films like this, it seems to suit your skills well. Some advice is that you could use a little less detail for less important aspects. Might help with that file size. I might also suggest that you create a character on a seperate sheet of paper, giving you a chance to iron out the details.

8/10 and 4/5

RandomStar responds:

Thank you for the kind words and advice, if we ever make another film in this style we'll be sure to consider it!

[MTL3(Madness Deportation)]

Alright

My favorite was the giant gun...lol. Keep working on the layering though.

7IsUnlucky responds:

rorychally is fucking awesome ye

[madness consequences]

You must tell us

How long did it take to come up with such an ingenious and...(laughing) elaberate plot as this (lol)?

kanamomashouse responds:

IT TOOK ME 1000 DAMN DAYS! TO BAD!

[Madness Destruction.]

Here's a four letter word...

...that represents this overall style of flash .|.. Here's an idea: KILL SOMEONE. When I see "Madness" I want to see massive killing, not this garbage.

Karples responds:

...that represents this overall style of flash .|.. Here's an idea: KILL SOMEONE. When I see "Madness" I want to see massive killing, not this garbage.

[Madness Spy]

I noticed some stuff

You need some original music to match the ambience. The silencer was flashing before the actual thing was attached. Needs more spy-like moves in it. Be sure to add in some FX for the two-way radio, a crackle to signal a change in speaker or something. You will also need a major antagonist as in the other madness flashes. Lacking in gore, put some pools of blood in, make it apear that the victims are actually bleeding. And finally, I need to stop being so critical of other people's work. PM me if you would like more advice.

Ratcaller responds:

Thanks for tips :)
And I know that error with silencer, but i noticed it too late...

[ComiX Episode Two!]

Yay Garageband!

little hard to make out what really happened...mind still whirling..."NANO"...ahhhhhhh shut him up ahhhhhhhh...lol

DAGamesOfficial responds:

lol Ill give yu a recap. Basically Ian fears the 2 are in danger of losin business to another shop, so Gordon goes to check it out. he comes back to tell Ian there is a retarded cat behind the counter, so now they plan to take the shop down. Gordons ideas were useless, but Ians idea was to use the portals drne to shoot the cats legs off xP so htey both get sent to jail, but the cat gets sent to jail cus he be a pedophile xP

[School 13 - I.A.C.W.]

Almost perfect...

All that was wrong was the sync was barely off in a couple of parts and the text got cut out on the ends.

Nightwayfarer responds:

sorry, i'ts very hard to make subtitles with the vCam...
but I had to use vCam, because it made it look more realistic

[Solar System Movie]

ummm.....

your voice over was out of sync with the text. venus was on the left not the right. i do like how you incorperated educational crap no one wants to hear. and please make it shorter.

Mfbabin responds:

yeah, i did some of that on purpus, just to see if people would pick up on that.
yeah...riiiight...*shift glance*

[Lego FIGHT]

i like the idea

just imaging making a game out of this. that would most likely score big points

Trismantoboss responds:

lol i don't know action script:)